Demonstration of technical and visual skills
This assignment wasn’t to take a photograph but instead to analyze someone else’s photograph. I feel comfortable analyzing and deconstructing texts of all kinds, so I think I did an good job of looking at the image and analyzing what is there. With all of the samples we were directed towards, I think I managed to find an analysis style met the requirements of the assignment.
Quality of outcome
I feel confident in my essay skills so I feel I did well on this part in terms of communication of ideas and coherence. I am not sure how my theory of analysing Mann’s childhood will go over, as my tutor noted it needed more research to back it up. I did go back and support it with research, but I realize I am maybe taking a risk in keeping this theory in the final essay.
Demonstration of creativity
This is an academic essay therefore creativity does not necessarily apply. However, I guess you could say that the way I approached the analysis was creative. Comparing Mann and Arbus, if I successfully stated the case well enough, could be considered as a creative endeavor.
I did a fair amount of research on this essay and I think I chose the best sources to support my analysis. Contextually I think I set the essay up well enough to have a balanced sense of who Mann is as well as my analysis of the photograph.
As far as reflection goes, I have been in a constant state of reflection. For one, I used my usual approach to writing which is to do it step by step and in between give it time to ‘cool off’ so that my brain can process what I have written. After the conference with my tutor, I gave it 48 hours before I went back to the paper, and after that I added and subtracted parts. I feel this reflective process is the best way to write and I hope it shows in the essay. It was also helpful to have feedback on a very rough draft, so I hope I can do that for future assignments at level 2.
Otherwise I have been thinking a lot about assignment 3 and my tutor’s suggestions and assignment 5 has also been on my mind a lot as I am planning to photograph myself again. I was advised to make it a work that springs from the previous work, so I am thinking a lot about that and trying to decide how to conceptualize my ideas.